Tara, the suspense is too much. You can make a story come alive. This story is one of untold bravery and fortitude. I can't imagine going from zero to frozen in sixty seconds.
I hope that your vowel play works so we can continue to get the full story on Facebook. Thank you Tara.
One minor correction the last paragraph should read "...sonar picked up ..." not radar.
Tara, the suspense is too much. You can make a story come alive. This story is one of untold bravery and fortitude. I can't imagine going from zero to frozen in sixty seconds.
I hope that your vowel play works so we can continue to get the full story on Facebook. Thank you Tara.